Comments : Eihlmahtj

  • 17 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Great use of words. Nicely done. 5/5 And thank you for reading my poem.

    Tina

  • 17 years ago

    by Noir

    You know what...I got to say this poem really has something special in it, and if you tweeked the use of pronouns...Seeing as you said this entity is asexual...

    Other than that, you got a real poetic gem here....Be glad you made it...

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was absolutely delightful to read, Kabs. Having stated an androgynous being is exceptional. Also, this can be view as having both sexes...hmm. I envisioned this as a well-balanced, ethereal being, by the way...

    ...mystically deep, as always...