Wow, hun.
That was really sweet... though a tad sad. Hehe...that rhymed... lol.'
The flow was flawless & your emotions were very strong.

"I see you everyday
We walk to class a lot
We know each other as friends
But my heart is what you've got"

^ My favorite stanza & a wonderful way to open up the poem! 5/5 Keep writing!

Stephanie Lynn .+.

I think tht this is too short...more poeticiveness..more details...feels like this is general in a sense..but its still good..

welcome to the club...i think i will b enjoying reading your poems and qoutes,reading how you feel and i'll b giving you lots of comments so don't b annoyed if i put too much comments....and if u ever need someone to talk to..im here =)

Jazzy

Awwww....i like this poem its very nice..plus i dont think it should b secret..just find oyut if he likes u back..or she..keep on writing =)

Try singing it you will find its good

This was beautiful...
I loved the first stanza, it was a beautiful opener.
The flow was good throughout, the wording was pretty and I loved the ending.