The Boy You Can't Resist (Sonnet)

by Darien   Apr 1, 2007


The Boy You Can't Resist (Sonnet)

Close your eyes and drift into land of dreams
I am waiting to hold you in my arms
When you sleep everything is as it seems
Now you cannot resist my boyish charms

Fall in love with me for your heart is mine
On this beach, we lie on it's sandy shores
Together with our fingers intertwined
Stay here with me I am forever yours

A sudden kiss brushing against my lips
Passionate and romantic is love's game
Sensitive skin caressed by fingertips
A loud whisper as you call out my name

Keep your eyes closed and we'll be together
I am the boy of your dreams forever

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Another excellent poem.. filled with romance and passion.. you once again describe your emotions perfectly.. beautiful choice of words to describe such a beautiful emotion.. wonderful work :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wonderful write, I've never written a Sonnet before, well actually I wrote an Italian Sonnet once. But anyways, the poem was very beautiful and I loved your word choice. The flow and rhyme where good. Keep up the excellent work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Seronum

    Very nice althought when i hear the word Sonnet i think of hamlet or shakespear lol but overall nicely done. Keep it up man!

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I loved that it was consistent.
    But the ending seemed kind of forced.
    I found the boyish charms quite funny. Lol.
    It was a nice poem.
    I love the flow of it as well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kim

    How did I not notice when you posted this?????? This was such a sweet and tender poem Darien :) It made me all warm and fuzzy on the inside, you are such a talented writer!!!!!!

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