Ceased minds

by Corruption   Apr 1, 2007


Love is complex
full of questions
all usually unanswered
these questions manifest
within a paranoid mind
a brilliant mind
but one that wonders too much
the questions that fly through this mind
range from many things like
does she love?
Which gets answered by
how do I know if she does?
Questions that answers question
each one of them making that mind worried
with the worried mind come pain
with pain comes depression
and when the mind is depressed
it ceases to function
and all those unanswered question float around
inflicting pain which causes more depression
the mind drops further into darkness
not knowing if it should trust her or not
she caused it all
but she also is making it up
but the ceased mind is blind
and does not see the pain it inflicts on her
when the mind states the questions
asks if she loves it
or how does it know if she does
with each question both minds sink
deeper into depression, darkness
together yet far away
unable to see each other
but able to feel each other
both ceased minds floating in the darkness
searching for the answers
if they love each other or not

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    I like this one alot..

    Beck

  • 17 years ago

    by mel

    I agree with some comments left above, it is powerful piece of writibg. I like how you have linked it together. Really good =)

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Awesome poem thanks for your comment on "torment"

  • 17 years ago

    by Alison

    This one is my favorite so far, btw.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alison

    This is really touching. i think youre good! =] 5/5 most definetly, and its got a small sense of sadness to it but its still really wonderful. a love poem. thats probably the best kind