Very good poem!

Wow, this was an amazing poem. It was woah, I hope things turn out better.

Alissa

I'm sorry

This poem left me speechless...its very powerful...good job...

This is really touching. i think youre good! =] 5/5 most definetly, and its got a small sense of sadness to it but its still really wonderful. a love poem. thats probably the best kind

This one is my favorite so far, btw.

Awesome poem thanks for your comment on "torment"

I agree with some comments left above, it is powerful piece of writibg. I like how you have linked it together. Really good =)

I like this one alot..

Beck