Comments : UNREQUITED LOVE.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "How can Love be so one sided,
    Though two were meant to play.
    Its wrong to make someone love you,
    When their heart leads them another way."

    Such a heart-wrenching poem..
    You've managed to portray so much emotion in this piece...
    Beautiful yet bittersweet
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a very sad poem of love. Your words cry for you. The emotions run down your pages. Great job. I guess it is hard to love one that does not love you the same way. It is also hard to love your true love that passed away. Both are very painful.

    Maybe tomorrow the tears will stop,
    And my heart will find some peace.
    But my love for her will always be
    And my longing will never cease.

    This sums it up all very nicely.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Why does the pain seem to grow?
    And the tears never want to end.
    Why does my heart keep breaking?
    And yet I keep loving her again and again

    I can relate to this. True love is so powerful that it completely overwhelms us.
    I'm aching but can't stop loving.
    Great expressions.

    Thanks for all your inspiration, my Hopeless Romantic.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Sad and heartfelt piece. Good flow. Nice job putting heartache to rhyme!