by Holly Apr 1, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Like walking in the rain, |
I dont normally like poems that rythmn as yours tend to do but yours tend to be an exception to that... you are able to express great ideas well without interupting the message you are trying to portray with your rhymning |
by Tricky Daze
Good wording and rhyme...They make it alot easier to read..and a good topic |