[Im]mortality

Duh!

Well written poem

Good topic, unique way of expressing.
Still, i liked your other poems better.
Well written.

5/5
~Stephen White

Has a lot of meaning behind, though I'm not sure what to call it myself. 5/5

I think this has a lot of meaning behind it, that I'm not quite getting at the moment.
I guess it's just too late for me to comprehend too much.
It was worded well.
And, another piece that left me questioning.
Love when that happens.

Keep it up. :]

That really got me thinking. it goes deep to the human minde. u can take it in so many ways. keep writing:)

My idea is maybe the sin of yesterday, today, and tomorrow.....just a thought...another great one....i'll come back tomorrow and comment more of your work....