My Prince Charming

by Hollymariee   Apr 1, 2007


I went to a palace,

Expecting to meet someone new,

The last thing I imagined,

Was that I'd meet someone like you.

Sweet and funny,

Tall with golden locks,

A laugh to make your heart melt,

And a smile bright enough to shock.

Bright blue eyes,

A voice so sweet.

Every thing you have

Just sweeps me off my feet.

I want to love you,

But you're kingdom's so far away.

Yet even then I think of you,

Every second of the day.

A romance forbidden,

And an age so unfair.

But no matter what the difference,

You'll always be there.

You're my prince charming,

You complete my fairy tail.

You send my heart to paradise,

And for me you'd never fail.

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  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    I am very impressed with this! Your poem is very beautiful and gives you the feeling that you are reading a chapter out of a romance novel. The topic of forbidden love is something that most people don't right about and when they do they usually do not express themselves so well. But you really did an excellent job. The title caught my attention and you portrayed the subject well. Great Job Sweetie, Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Awh beautiful. I didnt really see much wrong with this.. I thought that you did a beautiful job expressing yourself.. I kind of wish there was more to this, but thats just me. Otherwise, another well deserved 5/5. Short and sweet.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This is a really good poem, but after the ending of the fourth stanza, it sort of lost its flow. Good job though.

    .:CiiNDY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I like this one 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    A few mistakes in it. Everything is one word and you used the wrong you're in the line: But you're kingdom's so far away.
    That would mean but you are kingdom's so far away. It's not a bad poem but once again I'm usually not that big on love poems. I'll give it a three.

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