Just letting you know that this is a really really good poem. But I have to say one thing. Honestly "we" and by we I mean ladies in general don't have to be surffering and dying like you mention. We have to stand up for what we bellieve and make someone believe the same too. I mean damn we can't just run around crying all the time to get someone's attention. And I'm not saying this because my life is easy, in actuallity its not. I have to suffer too I don't have things handed to me for free I have to pay my way through life, but somehow I am managing through life and I am going to be a better lady. That's all I have to say. But don't get me wrong. Your poem was off the hook. I really like the way you put things into prospective.
I'm out
Lady Remix

hey i jus wanted to say i loves ya poem!!! its great i love it.. it speaks da truth n i love it!!! i aint gun hate onit cause it says black women there is others out there like us.. (ricans) we out there too im one fa a fact i been out dere granted im onli 17 but still.. ya know.. i been thru da shit drugs sex n shit fa money.. but i lvoes ya poem iight!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up da good work iight!!! ttyl

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