Anorexia

by TaNyabAbEE   Apr 1, 2007


I look in the mirror,
and all I can see.
Is all the fat,
on my body, on me.

People tell me,
that I'm really thin.
This fight with my body,
I can't win.

I'll starve myself,
until no more I can.
You never helped me,
yo never lent a hand.

Now I'm losing,
this battle within my head.
I'm slowly losing myself,
nothing more I could've said.

As my body wastes away,
I say just a little more.
I thank the Lord above,
my parents do not know.

This disease inside of me,
it's taken all control.
I cannot feel a thing,
not in my heart, nor in my soul.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ThatPerson

    *Tear* =') 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ~Rae-Lee~

    Wow great poem... thos poem realy hits home woth me .. I know how you feel

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    ^^ I agree with Jenna. I can't really add anymore to it. Great write. Anorexia is a truly scary thing. I wish you ((if it's true)) the best of luck... Remember that you are beautiful no matter what people say. Thanks for the comment!!

    Ciao~

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Wow. I actually quite enjoyed that.

    You displayed the whole challenge as well as your emotions and thoughts on it withing the piece without really jumping from idea to idea and making it really confusing. And I liked that.

    Anorexia isn't an easy thing, but it is VERY dangerous, so if this poem is true and you are suffering from it, please get help from someone, it's not easy I know but it really pays off.

    Anyways enough of that, I liked this poem and I gave it a 5/5. Keep writing and I'll try to keep commenting when I can (:

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