Wow. I actually quite enjoyed that.

You displayed the whole challenge as well as your emotions and thoughts on it withing the piece without really jumping from idea to idea and making it really confusing. And I liked that.

Anorexia isn't an easy thing, but it is VERY dangerous, so if this poem is true and you are suffering from it, please get help from someone, it's not easy I know but it really pays off.

Anyways enough of that, I liked this poem and I gave it a 5/5. Keep writing and I'll try to keep commenting when I can (:

^^ I agree with Jenna. I can't really add anymore to it. Great write. Anorexia is a truly scary thing. I wish you ((if it's true)) the best of luck... Remember that you are beautiful no matter what people say. Thanks for the comment!!

Ciao~

Wow great poem... thos poem realy hits home woth me .. I know how you feel

*Tear* =') 5/5