Wow...first of all thanks for commenting my poem. second of all... this is absolutely amazingg!! I absolutely love it. The rhyme was perfect, and the poem itself was so perfectly worded. it was perfect. hee hee.

Keep writing! you're an amazing artist!!

:-)

I love this poem it is so touching. I felt the emotion sad and happy keep writing cause you are really good no joke!

Most beautiful poem i have read in a long time, if flowed nicely and was wonderufl, you expressed yourself in a way we can all relate too---tara