Your Beautiful Smile (Acrostic)

by Bryan   Apr 1, 2007


Y our beautiful smile tears me apart,
O nly one who can heal my broken heart.
U ntil the end of time, I'll love you,
R endered helpless, hoping you love me too.

B ecause of you I can now sleep,
'E'verywher I go, your love I will keep.
A ll the loneliness I've gone through,
U sed to be alone, until I found you.
T ender are your lips upon my face,
I nstant joy, surrounds this dark place.
F inally happy, my heart can now be,
U nderneath the stars, for all eternity.
L aying there with you is the sweetest bliss,

S uspended in time, by your beautiful kiss.
M y heart becomes whole, so complete
I n every glance when our eyes meet,
L ying here, my memories linger awhile,
E very time I see Your Beautiful Smile.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Aww this one is so beautiful, that i just could not leave without commenting, loved it, absolutely 5/5...Melody..=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Natasha

    Yeay! :)

    this is sweet! you have again a great flow and a very good way of bringing across a message.
    I don't have anything to add here... 5/5!

    ~* Natasha *~

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #6:
    This is by far my favorite of yours thus far! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem. Just everything about it! There is no possible critique! The whole idea of an acrostic that actually makes sense! It was easy to understand while still being SO beautifully deep. And the respect you have for this woman. As well as how it truly feels like all you do is eat, sleep, and breathe her. This is def. going in my favorites! AMAZING JOB! 100/5! :) :) :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber

    I really liked this it's creative

  • 17 years ago

    by Ivy Stockill

    OMG i love it. And a girls smile is very precious. :-) one of my favourite poems yet.

    XXIvyXX

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