Comments : Hold This Winter

  • 17 years ago

    by Ariana

    Wow wow wow - i really enjoyed your descriptions and language you have used. The only thing i noticed was that it sounded disjointed in some parts, maybe the stanzas could flow more evenly into each other. Nice work :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Are we mirrors of ourselves?

    perfect opening.... well followed by an attepmted explaination of the unexplainable self