by Cherise Apr 1, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
There's no simple way of thinking, |
Great poem. The flow was excellent. And the structure was great. |
I liked this, very controversial:) You certainly have a talent for this, keep it up:D |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
This was a great poem. the only thing you may need to edit is the structure of one line: making our way to wards the eve of destruction <<that line seems a bit too long |