This was a great poem. the only thing you may need to edit is the structure of one line: making our way to wards the eve of destruction <<that line seems a bit too long

5/5 on the message. that was fabulous. and i liked how you repeated the lines at the end.

I liked this, very controversial:) You certainly have a talent for this, keep it up:D

--steph

Great poem. The flow was excellent. And the structure was great.
Good job 5/5