Wow.There is alot of emotion in this poem. You have really good style in writing. It almost seems as if you could have kept going with it though. I could be wrong lol keep it up !! 5/5

"Holding onto your gentle gaze
I've cursed you with my burdensome pain
Run away as far as you may
let me be inside my grave "

That last stanza (to me) was very powerful, the message it's giving me, is something of how powerful a love for someone can be, that you would let someone go
But that may be me reading to much into it, lol
5/5
*gem*

The poem was very powerful, lots of emotion, good flow. Did you just start writing or have you been doing it for a while? But yea good poem. 5/5