This is truley a beautiful poem. i liked it alot. it kinda hits home for me b/c i went like almost 7 years without seeing my daddy, so yeah. it was beautifuly writen as well, you were able to get your point across, in just a few stanzas. I loved it. 5/5

Really good beautiful poem. i really loved it

Wonderful poem. Sad. The flow was excellent and the structure was great. Good job 5/5

:Sarah:

I really like this. The flow was good, and the meaning was very strong. Great job.

This poem is really good and it is exactly explaining me
i have a drunk for a father who i havent seen in about 9 yrs or longer great work

Very touching. Word choice worked well with the mood of this poem. Really paints a picture in the readers' mind. Definitely a great read! 5/5

Omg.. i love it your style is very good.. keep up the good work..

I love this poem, especially the story that goes along with it. Sorry for including this in your comments, but I wanted to remind you about your contest. Thanks!

I liked the story of this poem i thought it was really sad and emotional but a great read. The style was amazing. This was an enjoyable read. Well done~mel

Aww this is an adorable poem... the simplicity of the words emphasizes the "little girl" aspect of the poem... the second to last stanza doesn't rhyme.. but other than that the rest is flawless .. from word choice to flow... fantastic job :D

This is really good. so cute and meaningful =)
i can relate because i lost my mum when i turned six . . i have a few poems about it too . .
but anyway, nice poem.
keep it up, love kayla xoxox

The ending made me want to go back and read between the lines. The title and the begining line of each quatrain accented the subject which climaxed with the object of the authors affection

Awe.. adorable. its so cute. haha im a daddies girl. XD

the ending is quite sad.. =[

5/5 excellent

Wow great write. I loved the repetition, the flow was very good as well as the structure. Great Job.

Peace, Joe

That was really good

Awww this poem is great im so sorry that you dont get to see your daddy anymore i know i would die if i didnt have my daddy here with me

Great write ! good flow, and carfully chosen words! loved the outline!
... sad but great unexpected ending!
kirsty
xxx

Amazing write! I really loved the repetition of "Daddy's Little Girl", it made the poem stand out more. The flow was flawless & overall it was wonderful. Though the ending was kind of heartbreaking to read. =[ Fantastic job, keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

I really like this poem. I understand how you feel.I have gone alomst two years without seeing my dad.

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.