Wow, speachless. 5/5 hun

Wow. very beautiful and sad. liked it alot 5/5 great job

Wow, thats a really good, and sad poem... I wish me and my dad had that relationship....
5/5

Such a sad write yet you could feel the lonliness of losing your daddy. 5/5

Aawe! thats so sad. but its really good....i love it 5/5

xo kisses xo

Wow that is an amazing poem
it is excellent
you write so well

Awhh this is real sad:[ but i loved it! it def. gets 5/5 from me.

Ur very talented when it comes to writing!!... i will keep lookign on ur file to c if u have added more becuz u really add emotion and in this poem u kinda make me feel like the little girl!...
5/5.! dont be a stranger

This is such a beautiful poem, most people can relate to it. Good flow nice rhythm. very meaningful. 5/5

This is a good poem and all, but it didnt say what happened to him and that bothered me : a lot, but all together a good poem 4/5

Awww. That is so sad. I think you did a great job on your poem! Keep up the awesome work. The flow was wonderful on this one.
God bless 5/5
<3Tayy

Awe. this is SO sad. but REALLY well-written!
Amazing work.
<3

This poem is sucha sad one. The reality is that no one really knows how hard it is for the parent left behind and the child left behind in a situation like this. So often does the child become distant from reality and holds on to the hopes that the other parent will come back. The surviving parent is left with having to explain the whys and hows of the situation and there are no words that can describe in enough details that the person will not return. I enjoyed this poem and it really made me consider the loss of loved ones and family members in my own life. Great job, Best wishes. 5/5 -Unattractive1

A very sad one but written so greatly, this poem has touched a taste of reality. life is not always the way we wants it to be, that s why it become hard and harder for us.
great message
you really deserve a 5/5 cause you are really great and talented.

Another wonderful poem:) 5/5

Great poem, I wish my real dad cared enough to want to have a relationship with me. This poem is sad and sweet at the same time. I enjoyed it alot. Keep posting, girly.
~Ally~

Once again, I can relate to this.
A lot of emotion in this poem, and I loved it.
You did a great job, hun.
I loved the entire poem, but that last stazna.. Well, it just brought the entire poem together, and made it a million times better. :D
5/5

I loved this poem very well written...i can relate to this so much with my biological father..i miss him alot great job im goin to read some of your others now..bye

5/5
tiffany

Such a beatiful poem. The message was clear and i loved reading the poem. Such a great writer you are...keep going :)

Aww this is so sad.
MIssing a dad is really hurtful.
REally great job on this poem.
The flow was very good.
God bless 5/5 4/6
<3Tay(^__^)