Wow, that was an outstanding write. I loved the rhyme and flow in this poem it was all so seemless. Awesome job, Keep it up.

Peace, Joe

It kind of reminds me of me and my dad when i was a little girl, I would give anything fro one last touch now. touching, so beautifully touching. word choice was great, and flow amazing. again another great read 5/5

This was very good all and all the flow was great and the grammar I saw noting to fault you on. But the message and the twist was just too much a very well done poem you should be proud of this take care Plot121

It is really moving. I used it in an anthology at school and my teacher cried.(I hope you don't mind I used it but we won as the best anthology.)

:) A great poem, try not to repeat the same rhyme.

Omg! That was so touching. :] I finally recieved the comment you left on my poem. I wasn't able to come on much so yeah, this is a wonderful poem, the last 4 lines got to me.

-Kimmy

This is soooo beautiful! the bond between a father and daughter is so wonderful...but when they're gone its soooo hard....im daddy's little girl, && i love him so much, even tho i barely ever see him any more...again beautiful keep it up!

Great poem! It sounds soo true because of the words that you used! very good! 5/5

I hope one day i can be a father like that, and my daughter will write a poem like you.. ^^
This poem was so nice,,, I liked it,,, simple, but the flow was good... An enjoyable poem,,
Keep up the good work..
5/5

Beautiful,emotional piece.A couple of times the wording seemed a bit off,but it was still good.I loved how you ended it,it closed it very well.A 5/5 from me.

Keep writing,
Miranda

*Cries uncontrolably*
*Stops*
sorry but it was so sad
this is realy different from what i am used to reading and i utterally enjoyed it
5
:~)Sam Mayo

I loved how simple this poem was. I know you wanted us to read poems with little amount of votes... but I had to read this one. It was so sweet, so full of love and longing for what can not be. It was an amazing write