Dig my grave [Parquette]
by Infected with His Deadly Love Apr 2, 2007
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Dig my grave and bury me |
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17 years ago
Again .. good job.. good choices of words and powerfully spoken good job again 5/5
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17 years ago
by Tricky Daze
Got so speechless it was shocking and powerful and forcing words
Flow keeps you going and the topic was so interesting
Keep it up
Take care
LAURA -
17 years ago
by Jenni Marie
This, my dear, is excellently written.
You did a great job with a style that I find rather hard.
The imagery creates vivid pictures and the flow is good throughout.
The vocabulary is a treat and I thought the first stanza was a great opener and from then on it just kept getting better and better.
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17 years ago
by Gem
Comment #5
Having attempted a parquette or two in my time i know how difficult it is when you have a fixed syllable count.
There are just a few lines such as
"These questions go unanswered"
...that need to have some more syllables added, but in spite of it, i think it's excellent.
You should have a good chance in the contest
5/5
*Gem* -
17 years ago
by Brigitte
A very graphic poem, over all nicely written, and I loved that you decided to write a different form of poetry than the usual standard, those can be really hard but hands down you did a very nice job. It was kind of hard to understand in a few places.... like
As the knife goes deeper I can't live without.
^^can't live without what??
Awesome job on these kinds of poems. I look foreward to reading more from you
