by David Marshall Apr 2, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
What would you do, |
That's a utterly sad poem. I think the sorrow in it, brings its life. It would be lifeless if you hadn't poured all your frief into it. It truly shows every emotion that you wanted to portray. I couldn't pick my favorite stanza... |
by Whisper
Oh that was so good! It was sad, but really beautiful and I really liked it. Hope everything is well. |
by Kurt
Brilliant write. This was amazing. The lines flowed beautifully and kept pace with the other stanzas. Magnificant job. |