Brilliant write. This was amazing. The lines flowed beautifully and kept pace with the other stanzas. Magnificant job.

Oh that was so good! It was sad, but really beautiful and I really liked it. Hope everything is well.

~Casey Jillian

That's a utterly sad poem. I think the sorrow in it, brings its life. It would be lifeless if you hadn't poured all your frief into it. It truly shows every emotion that you wanted to portray. I couldn't pick my favorite stanza...
I really liked
"What would you do,
If I forgot your name.
Because you finally meant nothing,
And that it was never going to be the same"...
but the last stanza was very moving. I guess i loved every part of it...yeah I guess that's the best way to put it.