Moments Whisper

by Lu   Apr 2, 2007


Moments Whisper

Inspired from this picture.
http://www.photo-inside.com/image/13118

In a vision, do I see you love
beneath clouds, white bird soar
time be held within my heart
awaiting the one, I adore

Ink whispers my undying love
wind howls a salty taste
Oh my, precious darling dearest
there be no time to waste

Moments tick against sunlight
half-past four, upon clouded sky
water ripples thirsty waves
deep breaths, shaken sighs

Come home to me, my love
over high water, raging sea
for without you my darling
there simply is no me

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  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Wow! Absolurtely gorgeous picture and awesome poem....a perfect match...So beautiful and romantic...

    Come home to me, my love
    over high water, raging sea
    for without you my darling
    there simply is no me

    ^ This verse is so breathtaking....love this whole piece! Very well done. All the best, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie84

    DAMN MISS LUANNE!!!! My you have changed!! What a beautiful write...you wrote of that picture so WELL!! I have nothing to say...I'm speechless!!! BEAUTIFUL LUANNE!!!!!! BRAVO MY FRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kim

    Oh Luanne! *sigh* this was so breathtakingly beautiful! so absoultely enchanting, a wonderful write! Keep smiling, keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by XsuicideXsexXscandalX

    Amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Very nice poem.

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