Comments : Moments Whisper

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    Great write, I will have to see this picture. It must be impressive to prompted such a brilliant poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Luanne
    This is so beautiful...Your words are singing.

    Come home to me, my love
    over high water, raging sea
    for without you my darling
    there simply is no me

    I loved this stanza.
    Take Care Love your
    Friend Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    "Ink whispers my undying love
    wind howls a salty taste
    Oh my, precious darling dearest
    there be no time to waste"

    Absolutely Beautiful. Loved those lines. A sad write... but I see and feel the hope and faith from your words.

    Wonderful

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "for without you my darling
    there simply is no me"

    I'm not kiddin when i say this has a huge impact on me.
    Me and Marcus have just had a huge arguement and after reading this piece, i need to go sort it out.
    So thank you for writing this Luanne.. it's beautiful and such a big help at the moment..
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    Wow, wow, wow, that was so amazing. That was so inpirational, wow. Wow! great just, 5/5!! nothing else to say

    alissa:)

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Very nice poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by XsuicideXsexXscandalX

    Amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by Kim

    Oh Luanne! *sigh* this was so breathtakingly beautiful! so absoultely enchanting, a wonderful write! Keep smiling, keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie84

    DAMN MISS LUANNE!!!! My you have changed!! What a beautiful write...you wrote of that picture so WELL!! I have nothing to say...I'm speechless!!! BEAUTIFUL LUANNE!!!!!! BRAVO MY FRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Wow! Absolurtely gorgeous picture and awesome poem....a perfect match...So beautiful and romantic...

    Come home to me, my love
    over high water, raging sea
    for without you my darling
    there simply is no me

    ^ This verse is so breathtaking....love this whole piece! Very well done. All the best, Debbie