Damn, this is simply breathtaking.... beautiful and precious words! A treasure!

This poem is so beautiful on many levels and one I really relate to.....

Yearning for daily embrace
To satisfy our souls.
Construct a bridge of distance
Reaching our eternal goal.

The angst of distance love tears at the heart....your words capture it exquisitely...well done...Debbie

Beautifully penned piece. The flow and word choice were good.

This poem proves that votes don't mean a thing. With the carefully crafted flow and heart that was poured into this piece it should easily be a 5. Alas some people just don't know how to vote on great work.

Keep up the good work.

Well I'll be damned Mr. Greenie! I didn't know it could be done...but you've just rocked my socks! HAHAHAHA There are nine millions poems saying I miss you...I want you back...YADA YADA BLAH BLAH...it's always the same. What a beautiful write! Nice to see someone being creative and changing it up!!!! LOVE THIS POEM!

So beautifuly written. Truley enjoyable [=
love it.
Carissa

This poem right here was just so carefully written I had to read it the same way. The rhyming done beautifully, and the use of words was excellent.

This piece is so wonderful, with breath- taking imagery. The first and the last stanza are my favorites, I especially like the lines:
-Magenta heart melting
Her man of crystal.-
You have amazing wording through the whole piece, and the flow is excellent.
5/5 from me

Wow, incredibly written poem. Emotions are beautifully expressed. Second stanza is my favorite. Ending is interesting and this poem is very original.
Well done,5/5

Another amazing love poem!! i love it so much because i can relate to it. Me and my current boyfriend were seperated for about 3 years and now were back together and so in love. Gosh, you're just so friggen amazing!

Beautifully written.

nice use of vocabulary.

loved it!
5/5