This is by far one of the best poems i have ever read.
great writing
keep it up :D

This almost made me cry...my uncle committed suicide a few months ago...you should be thankful that you got a 2nd chance at life. Even though it may not seem like it now...in the end its all for the better. As for the poem...I liked it. The imagery was good...I could almost see everything happening. I liked it a lotttt. Never stop writing! 5/5

` Liz