Loved the last two lines. It's a great poem with a good point. I always love these poems!
Charisma*

Gem
You did a great job on your contest.

It's an orgy of critics
That we're trying to impress
When did our world get into
This super shallow mess

Great message.
Take care
Love Cindy

Good job putting this message to rhyme. An enjoyable read.

Greatt poem , the subject is really thoughtful , with young girls messing with there body outta fashion is of concern .Loved reading it.

Take care
chavii,

This is wonderful! 5/5

You tried? why dont you just say you did it
since that is amazing and so so true
5/5

xx.chelsea.xx

Yes preech it girl cause you know you right...i dont think anyone should be someone they aint and i tell people that in school when my friends try to impress a UGLY FUGLY boy. well i think that this is very very really really true. great poem 5/5

Amazing

Amazing to read..you always have a great message in your poems gemma! i love reading them, they always flow very easily,

i really love this one though, it really hit me hard!

love always---tara

A wonderful message in this poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Me and some opf my friends where actually talking about this the other night and it relates wonderfully to that. Kinda freaky to read this after that lol.

Great poem 5/5

You tried and I think you did great!

5/5

Great message and one I fully agree with. Everyone should just be happy with who they are and when you can appreciate that, then others will appreciate you.

This is so true every1 trying to be something there not. It is sad how messed up and shallow the world has became. Excellent poem for this title great job.

Excellent poem!

5/5