Old pain

by Boy   Apr 2, 2007


Once upon a time I was
Passing near the grave yard
I heard aching hearted voice
I do not know who was
she? under the grave
but I know why she was crying?
that was the old pain of
past love that she suffered..

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  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    LOVED IT..EVEN THOUGH IT WAS SHRT IT JUST SHOWS US that our old heartaches wotever they may b are always with us no matter what..gr8 write
    keep it up:D
    bree

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow! though this poem are short but seems very interesting and every words are means alot. it quite touch and great structure! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is really good. short, but it said soo much. i defiantly enjoyed reading it. keep it up. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Again the grammer was off in this, which made it difficult to read fluently, and understand completely.
    Can I ask why "an" is capitalised on the third line ?
    It was an emotional and saddening write though. Thanks for sharing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Short n really full of emotions real pain...5/5

    God bless u

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