by IdTakeABulletForYou Apr 2, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Not |
by StandStill
I haven't commented anything in a while, so for the lack of real words, I'm sorry... |
by HidinVictim
WOW this is really good, and oh so true, it makes you think about how hard it really is to help others... i love the ending it was really unexpected, very very good... 5/5 |
This is really cool. echoing what other have said. feel like I've read it before. |
This was pure genius, excellent potrayal of feelings and thoughts. I love the fact that you put a much needed spin on the typical bully poem, the twist of being a concerned but frightened spectator and not the victim in itself separates you from the herd. I also agree that the pauses were well-placed throughout the poem to heighten the feeling and it made it that much more wonderful> The story sucked me from the beginning, title and all. 5/5 only because there is nothing higher and I am soo puttin gthis on my favs. peace leader man |
Have you ever been the target? i have. i am. |