by tinkerbell Apr 2, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I lay awake at night trying to find to answers to my questions |
by Fan Angeleo
"its like I'm searching for something thats lost inside |
by Fan Angeleo
You wrote this from your heart and that is all you need to write good poetry, keep it up, well done. |
I really like this poem the words are so powerful. I understand what you mean in the last line, just because we're breathing doesn't mean we're alive. great job 5/5 |