by Ashleigh Skye Apr 2, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
I remember from when I was little, |
Wow. this poem is great. nice flow and structure. where did you get the inspiration from. this is so powerful. great work.5/5 |
by Taylor Lyn
I have never read a poem on this site quite like this, I like it a lot. Great imagery, topic, everything. Excellent word choice, fits the poem very well. I look forward to reading more of your poetry! |
Wow, that was amazing, because through the whole thing i was like where is this going and how will it tie together |
by melly xx
This poem was amazing. I`m not kidding when i say this, but this seriously one of the best I`ve read. The topic being so emotional, you still managed to create a entertaining poem. The rhyme flow was excellent. excellent. This is a very different poem then others also, you wrote it from a "nazi"s view. |
by Sole
Wow. Really powerful and a great image. This was really well written, I noticed a few sp's , worse my swastika should be wore and when me world should be when my world. |