Wow thats deep. I love it. Very well done. Ive had thoughts like that before. but memory is leaving me. So i cant really remember them. I hate it im 14 and my memory is getting messed up. at any rate nice poem.

Yeah i really liked this one

Wow.
This poem is deep, soo amazing :]
A tip, though.
Maybe you can space them out
A bit more.
It was kind of hard to read.

I expected this to be completely different. I love the ending. It has a great message to it. I doubt anyone REALLY thinks how important the meaningless things are in our lives...well not exactly meaningless, but you know what I mean. Heh. Anyways. I loved it! Keep writing! 5/5

` Liz

Out of all of the poems i have read on here this one is my favorite nice job 5/5

This poem has a powerful message. More people should stop and listen to the leaves of the trees as they rustle against each other.

I think it would be easier to read if spaced out more into stanzas. Overall I love the message that your poem portrays.

--Sher

Oh well done on this poem. short yet very meaningful. its like you were praying to the tree. eh.

5/5 tho. David

I've often wondered the same about the stately old trees surrounding my house....how much life they've seen! Beautiful verse....thoughtful and sweet...5/5 All the best, Debbie

Thanks for the comment <3

This is truely amazing 5/5
simple but deep and powerful at the same time
I love it
It's a poem that makes you think, which are the best by far.
Well done
<3
Kelly

Amazing poems
glad you commented mine or id never would have had the chance to read your poems
fantastic use of wording.

Oh my god!that is amazing
you write sooooooooooooo well

please read one of mine i would love 2 hear what u think thank you

amanda

Wow that is an amazing poem! mine is like nothing compared to yours! o and thnx for the comment!

Very insightful and unique. I too would seperate into stanzas for presentations sake. The flow was good and the piece was thought provoking. Nice job.

I don't want to sound like everyone else so I am trying to think of a way to say it. You tie the tree so well with EVERYONE'S life in general, yet it still sounds like it is just for you. Your poem is very well put. Marvelous job.

Wow that was very deep. Very unique. Great flow.

This is a wonderful piece of poetry. Its simplicity and pureness in tone make it enjoyable to read, not to mention that it seems objective in manner and yet at the same time a tinge of something personal as well. :)
all the best and take care.