This poem was well written and powerful. I loved the way you ended the poem and incorporated the title into the poem itself. Great job.

Enjoyed reading this poem!!! It felt quite deep and very meaningful

well done

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Wow, very nicely written, I enjoyed the read. The flow was good, and the rhyming was ok. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Powerful, the flow was good, the last staza kind of threw it off a little, but it just might be me. again the word choice is awesome, and the emtion was powerfully strong. 5/5 for you deserve no less.

Powerful...touching,deep,,,good choice of words..n every line of this 1 was soo filled with powerful emetions which is well portrayed in this peice...god job on his 1..
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Really good. I like it alot. very sad and almost judgemental in a way. But it was good none the less. Great work!

It was a okay poem, I enjoyed reading it. I can feel that you wrote this from your heart, well done. It flowed nicely, keep up the good work. I like the opening stanza it grabs the reader's attention.

Did you know that it is said that somewhere in the world right no someone is talking/typing the same thing that you are? Well your whole poem made me think about this boy at school that at least 2 of my friends are wooing over and well he's a jerk. everday he'd break up with one and then go with the othe and i saw what it did to them and well it was pithedic. great, fabulous poems you did great.

I cant tell you how much this relates to me i have so many scars on my wrist from a guy and my face only stains when i have to much mascara and eyeliner on! i love it keep writing and i will email you soon.

cheers rhiannon

I cant tell you how much this relates to me i have so many scars on my wrist from a guy and my face only stains when i have to much mascara and eyeliner on! i love it keep writing and i will email you soon.

cheers rhiannon

Amazing as always

love you

The way this was written worked very well for the poem. The concept was brilliant to say the least, and the flow was great. Very impressed with this poem. Great work! 5/5

Loved it
keep up the good work.
i liked how you told it like a story.
it was cute to read =)