I like this poem. but im not sure about the flow or the wording... i mean its kinda just like a story to me, not a poem. and it kinda seemed like you had a rhyming scheem but if you did it wasnt that great... but all together id say it was a 4/5

Hun, I really liked this. It was very beautifully written. A great dedication. The flow wasn't all that 'wonderful' but the meaning in this poem was just amazing.

I have no room,
To make mistakes,
I have no room,
To miss the target.

^ I really liked that stanza. It seems to be so true. :]

Great job, hunny.

Bri x

I liked this ,I don`t think it needed to rhyme ,not all poems do . The content was great. thank you for your comment on mine ,I will read more of yours as I can.

Sounds kind of sad, but good. 5/5