A Plea for Freedom

by robin milford   Apr 2, 2007


Wrapped up tied down
A wild animal in a cage
this is not the way
things should be
Wild animals must be free
to roam
to soar high in the sky
to do as they please
But still I sit in my cage
tied down to your house chores
untie me
let me loose
free me
to do as I please

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    The stops (where you began a new line, not sentence, line) were a little funky. I dunno, something about this poem, I just didn't like it very much. It didn't intrigue me. It wasn't explained as to why you are a sort of prisoner. It just wasn't thrilling to me. I don't know if I should rate it. I'd give it a low rating so I won't unless you request for me to.

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    Super awesome poem i love this one and once again thanks for the comment:D:D

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I love poems like this, i think Free is such a beautiful word
    Fab message with this poem
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really liked this poem. i thought the flow was great. Good read ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by April McLaren

    Yikes is that how you honestly feel yikes then change your plans

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