Beautiful...

Awesome poem! Way to go on this one. I loved the emotion. You have real talent, dont ever waste that!

-xx-

5/5

I love your poems!

Sorry, this was a dream I had
One that will never come true
Because the only words I'm missing are
"I love you too"

I love this stanza. I love, love, love it. And I'm sorry about the girl that you spill your heart out for. I've been in that same situation for almost two years now...I don't want to bore you with my life story. Anyways, I'm only thirteen-what do I know about love? Great poem.