Comment #2

"As he surprised her
Hugging her from behind."

I love that feeling.
You write with such emotion.. it's excellent.
I could almost feel the wind rolling in from the sea
Amazing imagery
Well done!
5/5
*gem*

Definately another side of you (but we all have to impress our teachers and make them think we're "normal", right? :-D ). Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this poem!

5/5

Josie

I feel sad that the one grading was Mrs. Stroh... She doesn't give justice to poems, just the people who wrote them

<3... Justin