Blank

by @ly   Apr 2, 2007


Blank

there goes my mind in the whispers of the dusty fogy swamp but tonight its as clear as a piece of glass as it fell on the ground

i was gone for 2 terrifying days then i forget everything i know and thought when the glass shattered on the ground

tomorrow i have a test but a blank mind .for once no worries but having worries always sort of made me think harder

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  • 17 years ago

    by @ly

    I made it longer

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Very short..more like a qoute....needs to b longer with longer santzas....

    Hey,
    Welcome to the club... u typed tht u needed an oppion of things and i think an oppion is wat i or others will give you.....i think maybe here maybe you can improve while just writing bout wat you feel and all..i will b commenting your poems a lot os lol dont get annoyed of them

    ~*Jazzy~*

  • 17 years ago

    by @ly

    Y a 2

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