by heather Apr 11, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
When will you notice me. When will I get my chance with you. When will you understand how much I need you. When will you get out of your world and notice me for once in your life. If I was invisible would you need me would you want me. If I wasn't so fat and nerdy would you love me and would you notice me.When will I get to be your number 1 fan.When will I get my chance. When will you notice i am alive and stop stepping on my heart and hurting me when will you notice me. |
i can relate to this poem, i felt like that once.... but no more for me... I've got my man and we're gonna be together for ever... but that off topic.... umm... oh yeah, it a good poem, i like it alot... like i said i can relate so I get what ur saying.... but i think if you chose more emotional wording it'd make it better.... |