Babylon {Ode}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Apr 3, 2007


Sing to me a song,
Nightingale of Babylon;
A voice of the gods.

Precious angel,
Whisper stories
By nights long gone
Of your sweet sin;
Oh please, pull me in.

I do not mind,
To hold your kiss,
Within my thoughts.
My heart is true,
I will wait [for you.]

Dear Nightingale,
Do not fear the fast pacing hours;
I will stray no further
Than your heart.

Precious angel,
Whisper stories
By nights long gone
Of your sweet sin;
Oh please, pull me in.

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An Ode is a poem praising and glorifying a person, place or thing.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Hm this was a preaty good poem.. Not the best but that might also be because I'm not to sure what Babylon means and I dont have a dictionary with me here. The only thing that I can critique on is I didnt really get the feeling of immense glory. Nice job otherwise though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    That was really nice the lines

    (Pull me in free from sin)
    That was very well done. there wasn't much of a story line to it. That was disappointing but it was soothing Good job Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hey this poem was really well written, short but sweet, keep it up! nuff luv xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    Beautiful. The way you write...it is different, and creative. You're very talented.
    =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Wow, i love this part "Of your sweet sin;
    Oh please, pull me in." that is so good, i love the emotion in your poems, you're an amazing writer

    Brittany (MD)

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