by Alissa Apr 3, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
It sees the watching hand go by, |
by Nix
I really like this poem. Topic is interesting and every line in this piece is written excellently. Third stanza is my favorite one. |
I like this one, you do a pretty well job at writing, I would have to say, if you're only 14, then you have much time to improve, continue writing. =) |
by Corruption
This is awesome good jobb i love it u did an awesome job on it it is different then anything i read before better then alot of other stuff i have read also good job i love you lots ttyl:):) |