This is awesome good jobb i love it u did an awesome job on it it is different then anything i read before better then alot of other stuff i have read also good job i love you lots ttyl:):)

keenan

I like this one, you do a pretty well job at writing, I would have to say, if you're only 14, then you have much time to improve, continue writing. =)

I really like this poem. Topic is interesting and every line in this piece is written excellently. Third stanza is my favorite one.