Comments : Gone

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    So sad...I can relate to it.

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    This is a sad poem , but very well written.

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 17 years ago

    by amanda flood

    I love your poem it is so sad you touched my heart it was lovely great work

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I can relate to this at the moment.
    When you lose someone you care for so much, i found crying and unanswered questions were all i heard for a long time..
    5.5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Br0k3n

    "now sitting here crying on the ground
    me crying is the only sound
    i lay here beside your grave
    but without you i cant be brave"

    Loved it, but be careful on the punctiation, thats all I have to say. 5/5
    ~Br0k3n

  • 17 years ago

    by GothChick

    Wonderful poem! I can relate I had 4 deaths withn 2 years. Anyways, Keep writing poems your really good at it!