私は日本の詩歌を!!愛する!
lol ^ i love Japanese poetry!
5/5

I LOVED IT! :D
It made me smile, sweetheart.
It reminds me of one of those poems that junior high kids read, and it inspires them to write poetry. :]
I miss jr. hihg. ;[
Great Job. :]

btw. great imagery too.
Amaz

Woah i didn't know there was that style of writing and i didn't know there was a catagory called nature ha thats so cool, and im so clueless

great poem

~brittany (MD)

Comment #2

An excellent tanka =)
You managed to paint a picture with only five lines and it was beautiful yet realistic.
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

This was so pretty!
The imagery created vivid pictures for me and made me all smiley.
It flowed well throughout and I enjoyed the form of poetry.