I thought this poems was pretty good, I'm not sure if these poems are supose to rhyme or not but you rhymed day with day so maybe if you changed that it would make the flow sound a little better. Other then tht good job

Sad but cute.
I loved the first two lines, lots. :]]

Good job, once again!
Keep it up.
5/5

Wow i never heard of that style of writing, thats awesome

*new ideass*

thanks

`brittany (MD)

Comment #3

I've heard of this format and attempted it once or twice but i never seemed to find a fitting topic.
This one is brilliant, yet sort of saddening.
That's Valentines Day for you..
5/5
*Gem*

So sweet but so sorrowful
And it was so flawless
Beatifully penned
5/5
Laura

I really like these ways you have of writing.
You use all kinds of different forms.
Instead of the typicall:
abab, abcb, aabb,aba ect. you use all the forms. Very well done!
Thank you for the comment and rate on my poem. God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy

A really nice poem. I am always alone on Valentine's Day so I know how you felt. 5/5

Kalee