First love

by loverboy   Apr 3, 2007


I sat across from her
She talked of little things that made me wonder
Like someone who wants to express her feelings to someone
She looked strange and stared at me
At whole time when I was there

She asked, "Did you see beautiful stars around there"
And she pointed at those stars
She kept fixing her eyes on me
While I tried to entertain her

She asked, "Did you hear the wave of the sea"
Where it brings me to travel around your heart
That let us comprehend about dive and life
Its weird

I didn't see the stars
I didn't hear the wave of the sea
I didn't understand about life
Instead, I tried to be free
And also I tried to be honest to you
That you are so elegant

My days are full
But let me write these in
My heart that still empty
And you gonna fix your life into my heart
By loving me
And caring me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle

    Great poem;
    keep writing

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Beautiful Poem 5/5 good job

  • 17 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    I really like your poem because we really cant understand it like you understand it...its soo unique.....like you have a secret in this peom ....its wierd in a good way i like its mystery....5/5!