Comments : Guiding Light

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    **There's been a question I've been asking myself,
    why, oh why Lord, does my best friend hurt herself?

    When is it wrong? When is it right?
    To stand up for who you believe in, to stand up and fight,
    this is what I want you to think about every day and night,
    when you're on that dark path, baby I'll be your guiding light. **

    excellent lines...you are an amamzing writter, unlike any ive seen greattttttttt stuff.

    melissa 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5 beautiful poem. says alot about the power of a best friend. keep writing.