by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX Apr 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A monster created, |
by Kristina
Wow you did such a great job on writing this poem. it's sad but amazing. you really have talented. the flow was good. 5/5 |
Ok. |
by Delie
Wonderful. |
Wow. It was interesting how at the end you turned to make it about you. |
Wow, great write, I loved the choice of words. The flow as well as the structure was good. I liked your rhyming scheme as well great Job. |